TheAttick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orange Cat Behavior]

This was unsettling

GoldAxolotl responds:

Thank you!

[Dreaming of a yellow Christmas! 🎄 🚐 💨 🎁]

What is going on in that apartment behind the tree to the right

WheelieYellow responds:

Looks like a Christmas party!

[ROCKY THE WEREWOLF 3 THE LAST BITE]

07:51 I fully stand by this message's prompt

CHEAPTOONS responds:

"What has happened just now ??" message or the other message after that Im still not sure what you mean ?

[Agent Scholar-Episode 7: The Story Of Everything (Animatic)]

I like the sound and music mixing
the thunder at 1:35 could probably be a bit louder to give more drama

Generally, the text skips around a lot in speed, making it hard to read, and there is much confusing wording, even if this is a concept video. I, for one, would like to understand what is going on.

04:36 "On the rain again." I think it should be on the street again, maybe in the damp, could ally again. If the rain is the main problem, I suggest " since we didn't want to sleep out in the cold rain again."

14:33 "do you feel" I think it should be, "Yes, I understand how you feel."

06:09 "How my ech of us find a home" Might want to change that to "And that's how we met each other and found a new home"

06:14 "on" shude be in

06:35 "knoking the door" Shude have an on, in between knocking and the

02:11 Is the brand of the Cookies named Cookees? The label makes it look like it's just a misspelt word.

03:39 The label of the cookies changed from Cookees to Cookes

03:47 The white dogs say, "Remember what I just told you" Was it not that dog that was the one that put them in danger, and not the other way around

05:28
Was it not that the problem was that they were dogs and the organisation did not allow dogs in the homes, and not that they needed to keep the two dogs in the same house?

Run the script on grammarly.com and try again. There is potential here, but quality and consistency checking are needed.

z7demexico responds:

Thanks for the feedback
To be fair, I made this storyboard a long time ago and I just made it as a draft on how the show could look like.
Also, keep in mind English isn't my main language so I might made a few translation mistakes.
And the sound mixing is more a mistake about Youtube forcing me to edit the audio due to copyright issues and me lossing the original video.
Never the less, thanks for the advice and I promise to improve my material.

[McShooty Animation]

The animation is lively, but the camera work might be a bit too sporadic; from 00:14 to 00:20, the screaming dudes' shoulders are missing lines, and you might have wanted to at least animate the other person's eyes a bit in this situation if you want to give it a bit more life

Love the thank you in the end.

SeasonGrounds responds:

the missing lines on all characters' shoulders are intentional. There's also a bit of animation that got lost in this version compared to the YouTube one.

[Rejected | Family Guy "Morning Wood"]

I don't get it

PaleAleGary responds:

Might be why I don’t work for family guy

[Big's chaotic Fishing trip]

Can we get an extended soundtrack version with Big the Cat still in it? Thinking something like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNy9tbVzL0w

Twoeliz responds:

Euphionia made an extended version: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1347399 . I hope you enjoy it!

[ALFRED ALFER SPIN]

Hay, thanks for making this. It made me remember Alfred and dame old Newgrounds was...ya.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w26FfHLdeFI

salva-nirvana responds:

well, its good to hear that people likes my stuff

[Wendy Singing A Song]

Need background

CTG-Studios responds:

It's A Test Animation Bro

[Humerus]

A yes, thats the morning felling

Bobert-Rob responds:

Can you tell that I came up with the idea while laying around in bed?